tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post5760502223131736394..comments2023-05-20T03:44:59.601-07:00Comments on Far Above the Sun: The Writer's Voice 2015: Query + First 250 WordsTaylorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03399325280621691112noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-47627599901956251692015-06-01T08:06:24.851-07:002015-06-01T08:06:24.851-07:00Taylor! It sounds as if you have an awesome book! ...Taylor! It sounds as if you have an awesome book! When Monica sent me a list of her favorite entries I was SO excited to see this one there! I adore sic-fi, especially books set in space, and I feel as if this story sounds so original and SO FUN! I have not read LINKED, but I loved THESE BROKEN STARS, and Firefly, and Downton Abby!<br /><br />I already think that what you have is strong, but I would absolutely love to work with you on this to make it even stronger! Please pick us! I promise you will have so much fun on our time!<br /><br />And if you have any questions for either me or Monica, please let us know! Stephanie Garberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05418429225626297957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-14155919406396624182015-06-01T06:06:18.122-07:002015-06-01T06:06:18.122-07:00Hey, Taylor! Oh, I LOVED your entry. That “Downtow...Hey, Taylor! Oh, I LOVED your entry. That “Downtown Abbey meets Firefly” comp? It’s genius! And I really like the premise—re: the human harboring an interplanetary fugitive. I thought your page was strong, and I loved all the details you put in there, making us visualize what was happening well. :)<br /><br />Also, Stephanie Garber, my amazing guest coach, loved your entry. It was such an easy “yes” for both of us. And by the way, Stephanie loves Sci-fi, and reads and writes it, too. If you go with us, we would have some comments for you, but nothing major. We already think this is a strong entry! <br />Pretty please, pick US! We would love to have you and Kittilyn on #TeamFTW! <br /><br />Feel free to poke around my blog, read success stories, and there are a lot of testimonials about the kind of edits I do here: http://monibw.blogspot.com/p/editorial-services.html<br /><br />Let me know if you have any question. :)<br />We really want you on our team! Pick us!! <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00482654021641010175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-25560892377201100952015-05-31T17:03:04.635-07:002015-05-31T17:03:04.635-07:00Ooh, this is a good pitch! Thank you so much for d...Ooh, this is a good pitch! Thank you so much for doing it for me!Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03399325280621691112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-22955184533403683022015-05-31T17:02:34.230-07:002015-05-31T17:02:34.230-07:00Thank you so much!Thank you so much!Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03399325280621691112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-64151729409708940162015-05-31T15:13:31.764-07:002015-05-31T15:13:31.764-07:00Good luck in the competitions. Please retweet all ...Good luck in the competitions. Please retweet all the good pitches you see during #PitMad.<br /><br />When an interplanetary-fugitive asks for help, 16yo Kittilyn has a choice: hide her or turn her in and never know her secrets #PitMad #YAJ.D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/14592432725414737620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-56908707775399181082015-05-29T19:00:03.831-07:002015-05-29T19:00:03.831-07:00Loved the first 250! Good luck!Loved the first 250! Good luck!CHadgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664222162980105026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-77112021619930072802015-05-27T19:43:30.496-07:002015-05-27T19:43:30.496-07:00Thank you! It gets my mind running too, obviously ...Thank you! It gets my mind running too, obviously :)Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03399325280621691112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-16938785032118138822015-05-26T08:24:38.703-07:002015-05-26T08:24:38.703-07:00I love the idea of a huge place with no furniture....I love the idea of a huge place with no furniture. It gets my mind running. LOL. Good luck!Sussuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10060179011416062341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-57162364523516288282015-05-26T07:46:45.407-07:002015-05-26T07:46:45.407-07:00Thank you so much! Good luck to you, too!Thank you so much! Good luck to you, too!Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03399325280621691112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-17961890982513437012015-05-25T20:38:09.583-07:002015-05-25T20:38:09.583-07:00Nice tight query. Good luck with your work :)Nice tight query. Good luck with your work :)Ellen Mulhollandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17978299715941154306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-23629835203257824362015-05-25T17:09:15.044-07:002015-05-25T17:09:15.044-07:00Thanks, Laura! Good luck to you, too!Thanks, Laura! Good luck to you, too!Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03399325280621691112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-78847021072623624932015-05-25T16:24:05.936-07:002015-05-25T16:24:05.936-07:00I love the Downton Abbey/Firefly mash-up. Sounds l...I love the Downton Abbey/Firefly mash-up. Sounds like a fun book. Good luck.Laura Schmidthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06059495469781436557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-74768190898294699052015-05-24T09:36:20.445-07:002015-05-24T09:36:20.445-07:00Thank you so much, Amanda!Thank you so much, Amanda!Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03399325280621691112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-73669123632693720802015-05-24T08:33:27.710-07:002015-05-24T08:33:27.710-07:00Well done query letter! Good Luck!Well done query letter! Good Luck!Amandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00693827408620811568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-14372186076508585532015-05-23T05:05:44.902-07:002015-05-23T05:05:44.902-07:00Thanks, Athena!Thanks, Athena!Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03399325280621691112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-75155561633565445732015-05-22T16:38:22.166-07:002015-05-22T16:38:22.166-07:00The pitch DOWNTOWN ABBEY meets FIREFLY is so great...The pitch DOWNTOWN ABBEY meets FIREFLY is so great!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12992425052708950683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-82777625063029557652015-05-22T12:38:29.855-07:002015-05-22T12:38:29.855-07:00Thanks! Yes, I am on Twitter: @TaylorRouanzionThanks! Yes, I am on Twitter: @TaylorRouanzionTaylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03399325280621691112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-4273742900382953012015-05-22T12:05:38.334-07:002015-05-22T12:05:38.334-07:00Good luck in the competition! (Are you on Twitter...Good luck in the competition! (Are you on Twitter, btw?)Annette T. Doddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13153366966746537614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-35849270610630423932015-05-21T18:55:30.402-07:002015-05-21T18:55:30.402-07:00Thanks, Raven! You're so sweet!Thanks, Raven! You're so sweet!Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03399325280621691112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-4908203753060248642015-05-21T18:54:48.149-07:002015-05-21T18:54:48.149-07:00Thank you so much!Thank you so much!Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03399325280621691112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-77802785978009612902015-05-21T18:38:33.288-07:002015-05-21T18:38:33.288-07:00You had me at Firefly. I LOVE this! Good luck! You had me at Firefly. I LOVE this! Good luck! Raven Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03538947519732493635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-74392545532939698372015-05-21T17:48:21.179-07:002015-05-21T17:48:21.179-07:00The first 250 have me wanting so much more! Great ...The first 250 have me wanting so much more! Great start! Good Luck!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2762943614830355732.post-6677625825763896902015-05-21T12:39:53.690-07:002015-05-21T12:39:53.690-07:00I love your first 250! Would love to see how Downt...I love your first 250! Would love to see how Downton Abbey plays out in a sci-fi, too.Rochellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15018509020490710154noreply@blogger.com